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She hoped all the checks floating relentlessly through the air would land effortlessly on Friday’s payday with a minimum of fluttering and fussing.

September 5, 2008 at 9:43 AM ::
Br. Ezra's avatar

Bravo! Standing ovation for Jo!

Br. Ezra on 09/06/08 at 02:04 PM ::
Keith's avatar

I agree.  Vivid sentence with a perfect title.

Keith on 09/06/08 at 04:08 PM ::

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