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As his arms graced the city skyline and his wife mouthed obscenities close behind, it occurred to him that he had, in awful forgetfulness, left water in the teapot and that it would now surely rust.

August 20, 2008 at 9:04 PM ::
bakerina's avatar

Welcome, 7am.  Very, very, very well done.

bakerina on 08/20/08 at 09:35 PM ::
Keith's avatar

Welcome to Scrine, 7am.  And I agree - a very nice start.

Keith on 08/20/08 at 10:08 PM ::
'mouse's avatar

Hi, 7am.  Welcome. 

Take my wife, please.  (I’m sure your character (or real self) would be fine with the broken flowerpot incident, having long training in such crisis management.)

'mouse on 08/21/08 at 08:52 AM ::
pam's avatar

Hello 7am, and welcome!

pam on 08/21/08 at 09:55 AM ::

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