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Lucy in the Sky :: boot :: 13

TAGS: beasts, Becky, clouds, harlequin, honey, lucy, miasma, she-beast, shimmer

Lucy and Becky handstanded their way down the meandering cloud-path, Becky turning Lucy into a miasma of different beasts, including the amazing Shimmering-She-Beast-of-Honey-Yoghurt.

August 4, 2006 at 3:49 PM ::

By the way, I know miasma isn’t the right word to use here, but I like it so much that I kept it in anyway. Feel free to replace miasma with a more functioning word of your choice (myriad, many, slews...).

boot on 08/04/06 at 04:14 PM ::

Sure it’s the right word, if the beasts are shimmery and intertwined and form and reform in fog-like recombinations.

'mouse on 08/04/06 at 05:04 PM ::

and smell

e on 08/04/06 at 05:09 PM ::

Given your up-close-and-personal driving experience with that swamp, e, I hereby nominate you our miasma expert.

'mouse on 08/04/06 at 05:32 PM ::

dead nutria, nothin’ like em....

e on 08/04/06 at 06:14 PM ::

After catching a whiff of that nutria, m’asthma acted up somethin’ fierce.

Keith on 08/05/06 at 01:18 AM ::

That sentence is so much better now that, thanks to ‘mouse, I remember that they were indeed shimmering, intertwining, forming & re-forming, reeking beasts of legend.

Silly of me to forget.

boot on 08/05/06 at 01:21 AM ::

I’m going to have to borrow that last bit for a quick sentence before heading off to bed. Hope you don’t mind, but “reeking beasts of legend” is just too tempting to pass up.

Keith on 08/05/06 at 01:23 AM ::

Please do. It was asking for it.

boot on 08/05/06 at 01:29 AM ::

oh, becky turning lucy into! as in becoming! i was thinking it was like guiding her onto a road, turning her into a miasma.

sorry, really must be me asthma. arrrrr.

e on 08/05/06 at 05:10 AM ::

See. It is such a better sentence with miasma left intact.

e and ‘mouse approved Scrining, right here before your very eyes.

boot on 08/07/06 at 08:34 PM ::

i’m so confused…

e on 08/07/06 at 09:16 PM ::

Me too. Must be the effects of the miasma.

boot on 08/07/06 at 09:47 PM ::

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