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His date’s coy brassiere
Stubborn and immovable
A long cold shower

February 21, 2008 at 3:32 PM ::
Keith's avatar

Ha!  I like prom haiku!

Keith on 02/21/08 at 03:34 PM ::
Br. Ezra's avatar

I am not sure this is perfect 5-7-5 format. I read immovable as 3 sylables but it might just be 2. My pronunciation may be off due to a scrine stroke.

Br. Ezra on 02/21/08 at 03:37 PM ::
viki's avatar

immovable is 4 syllables. so it works :)

haha poor jimmy

viki on 02/21/08 at 04:10 PM ::

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