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My life, mysterious
A paradoxical nightmare
Sweet, yet bulletproof
February 29, 2008 at 8:18 PM ::
Once again I find myself stymied by the mystical 5-7-5 format. Perhaps I have counted correctly, perhaps not.
Br. Ezra on 02/29/08 at 08:19 PM ::
6-8-5. no perhaps; no cigar.
e on 02/29/08 at 08:53 PM ::
Alas! I was afraid of that. I was hoping the Haiku fairy would come by and magically change it for me. I’ll have to try this one again.
Br. Ezra on 03/03/08 at 05:18 PM ::
The Left Coast Haiku Fairy whispered in my ear that she always pronounces that word “miss-steer-yuss” and you’re very welcome.
'mouse on 03/03/08 at 05:30 PM ::
indeed!
Br. Ezra on 03/03/08 at 05:40 PM ::
Can’t do nuthin’ about the second line except tell you to drop the “a” and drop it fast.
'mouse on 03/03/08 at 05:45 PM ::