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The poetry of the smoke-filled tavern stared back at him from the dirty mirror while a single feather tapped the measure of the failed rhyme scheme against the edge of his glass.

March 1, 2008 at 11:28 AM ::
'mouse's avatar

I read that as “… while a single feather tapped...” and it was especially poignent.  I think I’ve gone all bird-brained.

'mouse on 03/01/08 at 01:00 PM ::
Keith's avatar

I like feather much better.  I’m changing it.

Keith on 03/01/08 at 01:05 PM ::
Jo's avatar

What was it before?

Jo on 03/01/08 at 02:00 PM ::
Keith's avatar

finger

Keith on 03/01/08 at 02:08 PM ::
pam's avatar

This exchange is some of what I love best about Scrine.

pam on 03/01/08 at 05:20 PM ::

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